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A_Fading_Sky



Зарегистрирован: 24.02.2006
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Откуда: Canada

СообщениеДобавлено: Пт Фев 24, 2006 9:15 pm    Заголовок сообщения: poem Ответить с цитатой

Hey! I'm new on this site and I'd like to share this composition with you... I know it's a bit sad, but well... let's read and you'll see! That's one of my firsts compositions so please, I'd like you to comment on it... tell me what you think about it

-Goodbye-

Sitting in front of the door
watching your
sleeping body on the floor
it's obscure...everyday, and every night
always the same stupid lies
but it won't be the same tonight
cause you'll never wake up again

Life is leaving your eyes
as I'm telling you goodbye
I'll give you just one last kiss
on your cold purple lips
and I will watch you cry
and I will watch you die
and get on with my life,
I'll get on with my life

Watching you lying on the floor
Now I can't hear you anymore
hey baby, can't you see
you were the only one for me
tears of sorrow fill my eyes
as your soul touches the sky
you fuc*ed up my life
you should have think about it twice

Life is leaving your eyes
as I'm telling you goodbye
I'll give you just one last kiss
on your cold purple lips
and I will watch you cry
and I will watch you die
and get on with my life
I'll get on with my life

Just one shot I had let go
My finger pulled on that trigger
reaching your arm
you touched me right through my heart

I'm bleeding inside out
you'll never come out
the word sorry is not enough
to change something about us
now I hate you, I love you
and I make it true

your last breath, your last words
everything whirl in my head
I heard the siren
Lights emerge the darkness

My last breath, my last word
Goodbye
goodbye...
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We can lear from the past, but those days are gone, we can hope for the future, but there might not be one...
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Стеклышко



Зарегистрирован: 03.03.2006
Сообщения: 1194
Откуда: а вам зачем? ;))

СообщениеДобавлено: Пн Апр 03, 2006 2:36 pm    Заголовок сообщения: Opti-Key (Optimal Code) Ответить с цитатой

Opti-Key (Optimal Code)

never look for trace of projects
forgotten in a dust.. or not?
erase all records of the objects
access denied: \you are locked\

and who I am? I'm an envoy?
*loading...* - *server is infected*
all keys of live we must destroy!
*Fatal Error* - It's disconnected


..hello! my name is just //unknown//
....hello. I glad! can we be friends?..
..be friends.. I die.. it's stranger now
...good bye.. I'll die for your defense...

..what death you mean? can you explain?!...
....forgive for love.. but now it's dead
...you've found this secret! and my name...
-my file doesn't exist.. you'll hide..

...the time of bliss.. we really did?..
-please, don't forget.. and never cry
-no.. please.. I can't.. come back to me..
\error\ - *currently status is offline*

...don't trust - I swear what I'll deceive
....but I believe you are still there..
..I'll lose my life but I feel live!
....my death and revenge are so near

the perfect friend - you are not mine -
my code is ready and all done..
but I can't run away from fight,
I'm just the minus electron

and I will send the all last bytes
the blinking pointer will stop
but never listen at their minds
forever I'll be in your soul..

*Intelligence in the balance*
request the name? - please, press OK
*the search in progress* - not success
my name is just the Opti-Key


P.S. My English is not clear :-]

Thanks to bonsun_f for help fix mistakes =)

The orriginal Russian version you can see on the Russian part.
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If you really think what you're more artful than me then you making a mistake..

Glass Love.
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anushka



Зарегистрирован: 23.02.2005
Сообщения: 95
Откуда: Эстония

СообщениеДобавлено: Вт Май 02, 2006 11:13 am    Заголовок сообщения: my p-o-e-t-r-y Ответить с цитатой

you : me

I come
soon
very soon
see me in pools
feel me in wind

pedalling through the forests
I come to you
very close to you
soon very soon

I want to feel soon
your breath
on my skin
on my
neck

you want me
I
you


****


heart race

I feel the blood
running in my veins
in my arteries
everywhere in
me

I feel the
currents of my lust

I am full of
you
full of love

my heart races
I race

I run
to you
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apoque



Зарегистрирован: 27.09.2005
Сообщения: 354
Откуда: Germany

СообщениеДобавлено: Ср Июн 28, 2006 5:39 pm    Заголовок сообщения: Ответить с цитатой

here anotherone I made

Planet 27:
http://apoque.ap.funpic.de/wp/planet_27.jpg
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heartshapedtaty



Зарегистрирован: 31.07.2006
Сообщения: 12

СообщениеДобавлено: Вт Авг 01, 2006 6:13 pm    Заголовок сообщения: When the stars decide to stop shining... [ Poems ] Ответить с цитатой

Beautiful..
her voice sounds, eyes like an angel.
Her beautiful soul that she opened up and
showed me her anger, her pain, her joy,
her blames, and with all these traits
she shined a light on my world.
We may be done but in my heart
she'll shine on.



White lines
They walk on white lines throat feels
sour i am your flower. You cry as i walk
on my white line thinking it'll take my life,
but i'll try to block it because you'd cry if
one of my petals died. Over these years, my
petals have gone from red to black. Have you noticed?
I have been fed with energy and life as my mind
decays. Fade, fading away. Oh how i need to escape.
Fade, fading away..my life goes another way.
Fade, fading away.
They walk on white lines throat feels
sour i am your flower. You cry as i walk
on my white line thinking it'll take my life.



Inhale
Smoke, inhale, erase.
Smoke, inhale, escape
my thoughts, my head,
this body i'm fed with pain.
They take my name
smoke, inhale, erase,
smoke, inhale, escape.
They throw it around and i
dont want to be found. Your
pointing pokes me on the sides,
i dont cry but ignore your words
go forth into the air and i see my name
scattered everywhere. Your words
shadder my pride, i wont cry but ignore.
Smoke, inhale, erase.
Smoke, inhale, escape.
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Kavi



Зарегистрирован: 12.01.2006
Сообщения: 742
Откуда: Sacramento, California

СообщениеДобавлено: Чт Авг 10, 2006 11:43 am    Заголовок сообщения: Ehmmm Ответить с цитатой

Well.. the first and only poem i have ever written... not that great but.. my feelings at the time..


I love you so much, It hurts sometimes.
I want to be with you,
But in my mind i have accepted that it won't happen,
I push my feelings away,
It hurts so much,
I don't want to feel the pain anymore,
Every day i love you more,
I can't help it,
I try to stop but i can't,
I've been told i would feel this pain,
But i did not listen,
But knowing you is worth all of the pain.
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heartshapedtaty



Зарегистрирован: 31.07.2006
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СообщениеДобавлено: Пт Авг 18, 2006 6:34 pm    Заголовок сообщения: Ответить с цитатой

Everlasting Mask

Carved feelings seemed to be shaped. Hard welling to let go of the darkness in your eyes. You sound so everlasting when you say "I'm alright." Down right dreadful day, no escape. No escape.. You look between darkness and light and stand out of sight hoping that no one can find you but lady let me remind you, i hear your screams, they are calling to me, you are calling to me.
I hear you lady, i hear your screams.
I see your talents that no one seems to recognize.
Talent for poetry that cures your sadness, talents for
peace and forgiveness that restore your happiness.
Happiness which was destroyed in our innocent years,
and created a little girl who held our world. She hid behind
this mask, which covered her deep sorrows and pain that
she couldn't explain. And now you look between darkness and light,
standing out of sight, hoping that no one will find you.


But lady let me remind you.







There's a glitch in her head
nothing said, mother has left.
Feelings for death are renewed
by this hour. She's so sour in a world
that dissidents live to run and hide
they grew upon her... her..
her...though she ran on but her
heart became crippled the glitch
in her head grew larger, now shows
no emotion, this is her future.





For all of you that go onto tatu.us , i am just putting in here what i've already put in the fan section there.


Much love,
Taty
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